Thursday 5 November 2015

My Simile Poem

Aeroplane


Flying like a shooting star
Wings as white as clouds
Tail as high as a tree
Nose like a needle
On the runway it lands

2 comments:

Mrs S said...

Lovely poem, Leo - well done. Please don't forget to share with us how you added the fish tank to your blog. we would all love to learn from you!
Mrs S.

ehdaniellap2015 said...

It's nice when you say it's nose is like a needle. The picture is nice of the aero plane landing on the runway. I like it when you say it's tail is as high as a tree.